Ok, so heres what I need help on. I need to know if this is a good poem or not. Please no hate mail/comments seriously if your going to do that then you honestly need to grow up and get a life.
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Lift the pen, dab it in ink
The ink is black, cold as ice.
Tainting the paper, no holding back.
Lift the the pen, dab it in ink.
The words spit out venom.
Crushing the innoscence of those who read.
Lift the pen, dab it in ink.
Sign the signature, curving left to right.
Enclosed in an envelope, it will be sent.
Lift the pen, dab it in ink.
Last and final step, adress.
Now they'll know where to find you.
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